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See that girl?

She made him smile on his worst days,
She stayed up to talk to him every night.
He made mistakes but she forgave him always,
He ignored her - he knew that wasn't right.

He didn't care, took her love for granted;
He expected her to always just be there.
She liked him but she wasn't what he wanted,
He dated other girls, she tried not to care.

Finally, she left, didn't want to wait forever
She found a better guy who liked her too.
This guy saw her potential, he adored her;
His intentions with her were honest and true.

Seeing them together made him realize something:
Without her, he was stuck in a lonely world.
All he had left was the memory of her leaving,
He had lost out on one amazing, special girl.

~C♡
It's so sad that this happens often in everyday life. Not always, but it happens :nuu:

Date: 30/04/2012
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f1utterby3 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I adore this piece. It's so heartbreaking, yet true. You wrote it beautifully :heart:
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GirlUndefined Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you very much, I really appreciate your comment :aww: It's not always easy writing about something so miserable :sniff:
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f1utterby3 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah, writing about heart-wrenching things can be really difficult, but you've really nailed it here!
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GirlUndefined Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Student Writer
Thank youu :happybounce: :hug:
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f1utterby3 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No problem :heart:
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djpimpslap22 Featured By Owner May 9, 2012
wow!... deep!
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GirlUndefined Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks!! And thanks for the :+fav: :la:
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djpimpslap22 Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
your welcome!
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Minferda Featured By Owner May 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
this awkwardly mirrors my life...
I loved the way you wrote it :)
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