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I long to be able to do justice to you,
but my words fail to arrest your perfect form.
I'm powerless to the supremacy of your eyes so blue,
which smolder and burn deep into my private soul.

Your voice enchants me whenever you speak -
I devour your words with an insatiable hunger.
Your hands - oh, your hands - they make me weak
as they pirouette across the ivory piano keys.

I remain stunned at your immense equanimity
and how you are composed during a tempest quarrel.
You are a passionate lover, you captivate me,
eradicating my self-defense with your gentle touch.

How naïve I am, to think I am worthy to vindicate you;
my words are futile when describing such a being.
You are truly a man of veracity, respect and loyalty too -
the descriptions are incompetent with such a noble man

~C♡
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“He’s not perfect. You aren’t either, and the two of you will never be perfect. But if he can make you laugh at least once, causes you to think twice, and if he admits to being human and making mistakes, hold onto him and give him the most you can. He isn’t going to quote poetry, he’s not thinking about you every moment, but he will give you a part of him that he knows you could break. Don’t hurt him, don’t change him, and don’t expect for more than he can give. Don’t analyze. Smile when he makes you happy, yell when he makes you mad, and miss him when he’s not there. Love hard when there is love to be had. Because perfect guys don’t exist, but there’s always one guy that is perfect for you.” ~ Bob Marley

Date: 31/12/2012
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*Me2Smart4U Jan 1, 2013  Student Digital Artist
well written indeed... I truly enjoyed reading.. the contrast sets the mood for the whole poem; it has a very deep and unique flow and as a reader I deeply feel the true emotions expressed ..:boogie:
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~GirlUndefined Jan 5, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you so much! I really appreciate it :happybounce:
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*Me2Smart4U Jan 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
most welcome:hug:
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Mood: Love ~chuchunyanya Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful! I know some people who's perfect for this poem! XD
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~GirlUndefined Jan 5, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you very much :la:
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~chuchunyanya Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
no prob :3
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