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She had never thought of herself as broken,
as missing, as unfinished, as incomplete.
She used to think she was complete, accomplished;
her flaws hidden, her heart healed and soul varnished.
Her Creator had made her independent -
she did not need her "other half" to be whole.

However

When he left, a cold hand wrapped around her heart;
she ached, trapped under the weight of missing him.
She craved his presence, his arms around her waist,
his hands in her hair, his eyes locked on to hers.
She realized she'd simply been fooling herself -
He was her "other half", a 'yin' to her 'yang'.

She had never thought of herself as broken,
until feeling broken was all she had left.

~C♡
"Every heart sings a song, incomplete, until another heart whispers back. Those who wish to sing always find a song. At the touch of a lover, everyone becomes a poet."
~Plato

Date: 10/08/2012
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:iconguitarangel1495:
beautiful, the last line gives me the chills a little :floating:
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GirlUndefined Sep 25, 2012  Student Writer
Aww, thank you so much :la:
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angel3433 Aug 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
omg this is BEAUTIFUL!
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GirlUndefined Aug 27, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you so much, it's much appreciated :happybounce:
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angel3433 Aug 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
your welcome! it was a beautiful poem!
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Kymira12 Aug 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I've seen a lot of heart break poems but this one was beautifully written. Instead of the inverted commas or quotation marks I think that by just italicizing them, it would improve the overall look of the poem. I love your descriptions and the flow of the poem. I love this and I think you did a great job with writing it.
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GirlUndefined Aug 16, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you so much for your in-depth comment, I really appreciate the time you took to write it :D And thank you for the compliment, means a lot :happybounce:
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CrystalTearz55 Aug 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
fucking beautiful
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GirlUndefined Aug 13, 2012  Student Writer
asdfghjkl; Thank you :la:
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cawelling Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
beautifully done. even guys can feel like this.
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