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Too often in our lives
We complicate things,
Cluttering our minds and hearts
With useless worries and fears.
Instead of drinking in the Summer sun
Or becoming mesmerized by your coffee,
You worry about getting sunburnt
And consuming too much caffeine.
We forget to take pleasure
In a simple hello and goodbye;
A smile shared, an "I love you",
A hug given for no reason.
We analyse every look and smile
Since each syllable means something;
Even a tiny thing such as an emoticon
Has a deeper meaning these days.
A simple "how are you" or "why"
Can be seen as offensive,
As too intrusive, as nosy,
Too demanding and suspicious.
Just talking to someone of the opposite gender
For more than a few minutes
Will have people automatically assuming
The two of you are in a relationship.
Instead of enjoying the music,
We criticize the lyrics, discuss the tune,
Making the song so technical,
Sucking it dry of any emotion.
Just sitting alone on your bed
Listening to "Florence and the Machine"
Is an effective method of losing yourself
As you methodically sip your tea.
Even lying on the optimistic Spring grass,
The sunshine making you drowsy,
As the birds twitter happily,
Pecking at the seeds you threw out earlier.
Too often in our lives
We waste time on futile things
When rather we should have been writing
Our names in the books of History.
For Heaven's sake, stop worrying so much, because:
"What is the point of living if you don't feel alive?"
~C♡
We complicate things,
Cluttering our minds and hearts
With useless worries and fears.
Instead of drinking in the Summer sun
Or becoming mesmerized by your coffee,
You worry about getting sunburnt
And consuming too much caffeine.
We forget to take pleasure
In a simple hello and goodbye;
A smile shared, an "I love you",
A hug given for no reason.
We analyse every look and smile
Since each syllable means something;
Even a tiny thing such as an emoticon
Has a deeper meaning these days.
A simple "how are you" or "why"
Can be seen as offensive,
As too intrusive, as nosy,
Too demanding and suspicious.
Just talking to someone of the opposite gender
For more than a few minutes
Will have people automatically assuming
The two of you are in a relationship.
Instead of enjoying the music,
We criticize the lyrics, discuss the tune,
Making the song so technical,
Sucking it dry of any emotion.
Just sitting alone on your bed
Listening to "Florence and the Machine"
Is an effective method of losing yourself
As you methodically sip your tea.
Even lying on the optimistic Spring grass,
The sunshine making you drowsy,
As the birds twitter happily,
Pecking at the seeds you threw out earlier.
Too often in our lives
We waste time on futile things
When rather we should have been writing
Our names in the books of History.
For Heaven's sake, stop worrying so much, because:
"What is the point of living if you don't feel alive?"
~C♡
Literature
Only When I Write
The drama unfurling in my life
Feels like the shadow of my hand
That grows as it comes ever closer
To the light perched on my bed stand
In that I can feel the darkest cloud
Ever such a menacing sight
In time I can reverse the feeling
But only when I write
Seclusion left me with nothing
Apart from creativity
Loneliness it turns out, my friends
Is quite the aperitif
For the feast that is awaiting me
If I make it through the night
Tomorrow always brings me new hope
But only when I write
You approach me on a good day
And I will offer you a smile
The same expression on the worst days
Because my manners are so mild
But don’t take me for a t
Literature
Letters Live
The middle three letters of the word “Earth”
Spell out the word “art”
This is fitting because when I create
The beauty of the world is where I start
The middle three letters of the word “believe”
Spell out the word “lie”
This is fitting because for all those who accede
There are an equal amount who deny
The middle three letters of the word “lonely”
Spell out the word “one”
This is fitting because I have felt isolated
Ever since you have been gone
The middle two letters of the word “life”
Spell out the word “if”
This is fitting because only when
Literature
Stereotype
Don't shove a name on me
Your stereotype can crash and burn.
You cannot keep me down;
I will always rise and return.
Your labels mean nothing to me
Utter nonsense through and through.
Every person is unique;
I am me and you are you.
Skinny, smarty, four-eyed freak...
Chubby, lazy, forgetful, meek...
Afraid, coward, forgetful fool...
Follower, do-gooder, mindless tool.
All these names are meaningless
I am me and you are you.
But when names cease to be
How can you tell who is who?
Labels define us and create us
Remind us of who we are.
Every person is unique,
But stereotypes can go too far.
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I was experiencing "writer's block" for about a month before this ~ not writing poetry drove me absolutely crazy. I felt like I was losing a part of me, and I was really stressing. Then SUDDENLY, out of the blue, I wrote this poem ♡
Date: 20/07/2010
Date: 20/07/2010
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good voice tone message imagery
more impact with fewer words. delete unnecessary, such as: "in or lives" "And" etc.
suggest read aloud---believe you will understand.
"poetry is writ to be read aloud."__ J T Stewart
more impact with fewer words. delete unnecessary, such as: "in or lives" "And" etc.
suggest read aloud---believe you will understand.
"poetry is writ to be read aloud."__ J T Stewart